Additions that could have been made to the video

I think that for the genre we had which was indie/pop, more pop. We came at it at the right sort of angle, looking back now there are definatly some things that i think we could have improved on to the video for exampe, even though the performance by the artist we used was good, i think maybe having her just sitting on the step was a flaw, perhaps if she was walking around doing various activities may have been better to watch. However still GOOD JOB ! ! :)