Rough Cut Evaluation

It's Clear to see our rough cut has some MAJOR flaws and some pieces are obviously missing. There's some pieces in the video where the lighting needs to be thoroughly edited because it either looks too dark or too off. At some points i think the performance suits the song and genre however it lacks in other places for example the really jumpy bits it brings it down and makes it look weak.


When we add things like the photo scene and the illustrations are made more clear I think the video will have a chance. Also other bits like the opening shots they also need to be patched up and made better. If its possible to re film some pieces of performance then that will greatly improve our video. However if not we'll have to work around it.